26/11/2012 - Today we came up with a pitch for our idea of the music video using Freytag's theory to help us. We had previous ideas to begin with such as an 'Alice in Wonderland' themed tea party, however we realised how difficult this may be for reasons such as permission to use a location and making it look professional. Due to this, we decided to go for a much simpler idea that we believe to be achievable. Our idea is this:
The protagonist will be on stage accepting the applause after just finishing her song.
The applause will then wake her up to reveal a teacher trying to wake her up from her daydream. (Here, it is revealed that she is in a lecture, not actually performing songs of any type)
The song will then start to play and she will be singing it very loudly and ferociously, however, no one in the lecture will be paying her any attention.
As the big climax, the protagonist will get out of her seat, run behind the curtain in the lecture room, and appear back on stage, singing the rest of her song with the band.
The audience will be her peers who were at the lecture room.
To finish the song and video, there will be a head shot of the protagonist and as she turns around, she sees herself sat in the lecture room, still in her seat, sleeping.
The bell then rings to show the end of the lecture (and the song) and she wakes up to realise she was daydreaming again.
30/11/2012 - Today we altered our previous idea for our pitch due to the reason that we discovered the idea was very similar to Britney Spears' song 'Baby, One More Time'. Instead we came up with the idea of contrasting the loud attitude of the protagonist with a quiet/sad setting.
Our Finalised idea is this;
The protagonist will be on a date with her boyfriend and catch him flirting with an older woman on a different table.
Then it will cut to a different date where he repeats the flirtatious behaviour with a different woman and doesn't pay any attention to her. This is when she begins to sing the lyrics.
She storms off and he follows.
The protagonist will take her boyfriend home and begin to 'play fight' with him, which escalates into her killing him by hitting him around the head with a giant lollipop.
She then goes upstairs to get ready for an occasion that is not yet revealed.
Cut scene to snap shots of the funeral.
The protagonist is walking (whilst singing) in a field with the band and ends up at some kind of gathering.
Close ups of the girls mourning to reveal they are the girls he had been flirting with.
Cut scene of the protagonist replacing his ashes with the sherbet.
She acts sweetly-evil to the girls by giving them sherbet.
The camera moves back to reveal the occasion is her boyfriend's funeral.
It then ends with the protagonist licking her lips.